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You spoke, and I was set alight
and I burned, the flames roaring around my ears
so brightly, they lit up the world.
My skin charred, black ashen pieces were caught
by the rising heat and floated to the ground,
and layer by layer it peeled away in parchment pieces
and I felt no pain at all.
Devouring me, your searing inferno
melted my flesh, you dissolved my every fibre
and branded my soul with your name.
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MrsNox Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2006  Hobbyist Writer
Great stuff!
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SnowyEggplant Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2006
Really neat.
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quentinwrites Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2006  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks. :)
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