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I like the way the
bitterness of my coffee
makes your mouth sweeter.
 
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xVanyx Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2014
Nice and cute, thought I don't really how this is an haiku
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quentinwrites Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Because it follows a haiku rhythm structure very strictly? What about it is not haiku-esque? :)
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